Saturday, July 24, 2010

What is your writing process like? Part 5

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Finished the last stanza of my bop in the backseat of the car. I feel some type of way about the poem. I can't tell if I like this bop, though I do like pieces of it. Seems like the three parts aren't married to each other...I need another set of eyes to look at it.

Here's a piece of it:

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ideas bubble and surface
easily at the beginning
cursive lead slides across
the page, filling in
the white spaces...but
where does creativity go?

since you went away i just
look into all other faces with no trust

The refrain comes from Maxwell:

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