Tuesday, April 13, 2010

NaPoWriMo: ReadWritePoem Prompt #13

Poem Starting with a Line from Norman Dubie

We drank our lemonade in silence
the sound of our voices might
spoil the sweetness
the taste of harmony
too delicious.

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Check the post that inspired this poem.

10 comments:

Wayne Pitchko said...

sweet for sure Evelyn....thanks for sharing these words

Only Footprints said...

Like it! I like how your lines get shorter and shorter. Terrific!

Lunch on Tuesday said...

Love the s-words and the image of sound spoiling sweetness!

flaubert said...

Nice Evelyn!

Richelle Dodaro said...

Love the simplicity and your take on the prompt. I like the sound in the line "spoil the sweetness." Great work!

Robin said...

Wonderful! Nicely done.

Erin Davis said...

You capture a beautiful, sweet moment here.

rallentanda said...

Yep, this is a good one!

pieceofpie said...

good morning e, i like the direction you took on this prompt and indeed the line you took as well... enjoy the simplicity of the what i consider a nature love poem and the beautiful story it tells.... thank you for stoppin by appreciate it... happy day 13...

evelyn.n.alfred said...

Today's prompt was great. I have to try this again with other authors.

A nature love poem? I like the sound of that.