Thursday, February 25, 2010

Triolet Thursday - Triolet #23

Do you know?

Langston, does a dream defered die?
I don't want to run out of time.
Opportunities pass me by
Langston, does a dream defered die?
my dreams hover low, but don't fly
John, does a dead dream toll or chime?
Langston, does a dream defered die?
I don't want to run out of time.

6 comments:

Kyle said...

Evelyn,

Thanks for your comment on First Person Plural. I don't know the answer to your question. You can e-mail deborah@32poems.com to get that answer. Hope that helps.

Nice blog, btw.

Kyle

Erin Davis said...

I really like the idea of asking questions of the poet whose poem was all questions...

flaubert said...

Very nice poem! Thanks for sharing.
Pamela

Tumblewords: said...

Terrific form and style.

Vizionheiry said...

A perfect poem asking two poets to answer their own work. Ahh..

evelyn.n.alfred said...

Thank you everyone for your kind responses.