Thursday, February 11, 2010

Triolet Thursday - Triolet #21

Snow company

This poem keeps you company in the snow
when it's just as cold inside as outside
when you're stuck and you have no place to go
this poem keeps you company in the snow
when you're not alone, but still feeling low
when weather and mood creates a divide
this poem keeps you company in the snow
when it's just as cold inside as outside.

4 comments:

January said...

Very nice triolet!

evelyn.n.alfred said...

Thank you. I had to reread it myself to see what was nice about it and I found two typos, so thanks again for checking it out.

Vizionheiry said...

I see I've been slacking on my Triolet watch. One day Ev will fix her rss feed. You're still not showing up in Google REader - the new posts.

:when weather and mood creates a divide"

My melanin would not allow me to live in the colder regions. No. I would have Seasonal Affective Disorder EVERYDAY.

-melikes

evelyn.n.alfred said...

How does one fix their rss feed? I didn't even know I had one.
I'm pretty sure I experience S.A.D. while I'm here, I just deal with. I write more when I'm glum anyway. :-)