I don't know how I completely forgot to do a triolet on Thursday...but I can't let myself off the hook for writing one.
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Robot
It's best to not tell you how I'm feeling
fragile like an eggshell, handle with care
my emotions you find unappealing
It's best to not tell you how I'm feeling
moving towards the process of healing
sharing often leads to deeper despair
It's best to not tell you how I'm feeling
fragile like an eggshell, handle with care
2 comments:
read aloud - it sounds lke a blues song - Bessie Smith esh.
I REALLY like this one.
best triolet yet!
The best one yet? And is it because it sounds like the blues that you like it?
I was probably feeling the blues when I wrote it. LOL.
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