Thursday, September 17, 2009

Triolet Thursday - #6

What is a triolet? Check the original post if you need some explanation.


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Triolet #6 (It's better to write...than dreaming about it)

I should be sleep, but I'm writing
better to write than haunted dreams
gnashing teeth, grinding, and biting
I should be sleep, but I'm writing
a complete piece is exciting
procrastination incites screams
I should be sleep, but I'm writing
better to write than haunted dreams

5 comments:

Vizionheiry said...

I tried a triolet today. It's still not finished. Whew this will definitely be the form in which you can be the expert! Your triolets are getting better with more variation!

evelyn.n.alfred said...

You'll have to post it when you finish!

evelyn.n.alfred said...

and thank you!

Doret said...

I really like this one. It's my favorite so far. I am finally starting to get and appreciate the pace.

Vizionheiry said...

Well I scrapped the other Triolet. The words I chose made it difficult to find a rhyme. I posted my first finished triolet today. Check it out at my blog. (I know you'll see this in a week after you clear your moderation! :)